This is the first attempt
at poetry, writing in verse by the poet. As justly mentioned in the
introduction, the poet’s life took a turn for the worse and the verses reflect
it very strongly.
Through different sections starting with 'Why' and then followed by 'Dreams, 'Reality' and finally 'The Path', the poet lucidly mulls over the
emptiness of this stressful life, over the never ending run towards emptiness,
the path of redemption and deliverance. The poems stress on neglect of nature,
the harshness of contemporary thoughts, injustice, grief, lack of simplicity
and happiness among others. The verses encourage one to break free from the
shackles of the rat race and live in purity. And like all holy precepts, prods
one to probe deep within oneself since all the answers you seek lay within, God
dwells within.
The undertaking is
undoubtedly earnest and commendable, though I found some of the poems to be truly amateurish
and exhibiting a flamboyant desperation to rhyme words. And did I mention that
as you read one poem after another, you experience a looming repetitiveness.
Some of the verses are really striking and honest and induce thoughtfulness
like the one below. Overall a thought provoking read.
I invite you to jump out of the race
And look at what lies on the other
side
There will always be someone above
and below
Where’s the need to be jealous or
have pride
– Sunil Sandeep
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